Let us examine the body of your work for signs of intelligence and a civilized demeanor--or for that matter, any indication of an attempt at "discussion."
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
your all rearded this is fake
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"your", naturally should be written "you're" and I can only guess that "rearded" is meant to mean "retarded", though the use of such a word in its apparent context is considered insensitive and boorish when amongst civilized society.
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
oh no my freind i do but i just cant take this seriously
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Again, no punctuation, spelling errors et al. make for a less than credible claim to intelligence
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
d*mn lycia the repentant you hott you can get on your knees for me lol
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Hmm. . . a disregard for the rules of written English and a gratuitous proposition towards a True Christian lady -- neither intelligent, civilized or an attempt to contribute to the discussion at hand.
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
oh no i beleive in god just dont take this forum too seriously forgive me if i come off as offending
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Well, here you have either forgotten the function of the shift key or you have decided to denigrate the deity in which you claim to believe. You also insult everyone's intelligence by claiming that you don't mean to give offense shortly after suggesting that a True Christian woman perform a certain sex act upon you.
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
haha hard to get so ex prostitute huh? that had to be an interesting lifestyle
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I read words here, but any actual meaning alludes me.
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
when i say gangsta i dont mean as in gang memeber its a style and i am a hip hop artist
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Grammar and spelling errors suggest lack of intelligence while the claim to an identity as an artist suggests pretentiousness-- an interesting combination.
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
really? well f*ck you all. douchebags
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The proper use of punctuation is offset somewhat by the profanity and childish insult.
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
well seeing as i tried to have a civilized intellegent discussion with you people only to be ridiculed. that seemed like a good answer at the time and i rap about hating white people?
ps. im white
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You spelled "civilized" and "discussion" correctly. And you used punctuation. Bravo. You still need to work on capitalization as well as the delusion that you can appropriate African-American culture in an attempt to be "authentic" and "cool" without making a complete and utter fool of yourself.
May I suggest for your reading elucidation a book entitled, "Everything But the Pain"? This book deals with the perspective of the Black community to the influx of young white people who have chosen to co-opt Black culture for the sake of being fashionable. It provides an intelligent, civilized discussion of a subject that has bearing on your "art".
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Originally Posted by gods gangsta
really old man ill shatter jaw in one punch shut up before you have a heart attack
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Ah, threats of violence-- A civilized contribution to any discussion. Always the recourse of an intelligent person.
Ennui has set in now. I shall bid you adieu.
Jadedly Yours,
Handmaiden