Quote:
Originally Posted by Blind leading the blind
For all that's been,
For all I've loved.
You won't let me fall.
Love so unconditional,
Love so profound.
You know me. You see
Me. You see right through
Me. You stand before me.
*snip* etc
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Needs some work, dude. But seriously, you shouldn't be upset about the comments these people are making. By posting your poems here, you aren't just asking for it, you're BEGGING for it.