[Kyrre Eliasen]

Originally Posted by Brother Gonzalez

Sorry, but I don't understand your punctuation. With the 3 dots? What were you trying to express there? Were you trying to create suspense? Because the second part of the sentence is not a punchline, just a confirmation of the first part. So you create suspense and then confirm what you just said. This creates a frustration in the reader, who was expecting something else; this "frustration" then is directed towards you in the form of hostile thoughts about you and your close relatives.

How dare You,