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04-22-2007, 07:14 PM
Here is another peom for you. My cousin wrote it.
Don't read without tissues because it will make you cry if you have a heart..
Her hair was up in a pony tail,
her favorite dress tied with a bow.
Today was Daddy's Day at school,
and she couldn't wait to go.
But her mommy tried to tell her,
that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand,
if she went to school alone.
But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say. What to tell her classmates of why he wasn't there today.
But still her mother worried,
for her to face this day alone.
And that was why once again,
she tried to keep her daughter home.
But the little girl went to school
eager to tell them all.
About a dad she never sees;
a dad who never calls.
There were daddies along the wall in back, for everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently,
anxious in their seats
One by one the teacher called a student from the class. To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly passed.
At last the teacher called her name,
every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching,
for a man who wasn't there.
"Where's her daddy at?"
she heard a boy call out.
"She probably doesn't have one,"
another student dared to shout.
And from somewhere near the back,
she heard a daddy say,
"Looks like another deadbeat dad,
too busy to waste his day."
The words did not offend her,
as she smiled up at her Mom.
And looked back at her teacher,
who told her to go on.
And with hands behind her back,
slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child,
came words incredibly unique.
"My Daddy couldn't be here,
because he lives so far away.
But I know he wishes he could be,
since this is such a special day.
And though you cannot meet him,
I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy,
and how much he loves me so.
He loved to tell me stories
he taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses,
and taught me to fly a kite.
We used to share fudge sundaes,
and ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him.
I'm not standing here alone.
"Cause my daddy's always with me,
even though we are apart
I know because he told me,
he'll forever be in my heart"
With that, her little hand reached up,
and lay across her chest.
Feeling her own heartbeat,
beneath her favorite dress.
And from somewhere here in the crowd of dads, her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter,
who was wise beyond her years.
For she stood up for the love
of a man not in her life.
Doing what was best for her,
doing what was right.
And when she dropped her hand back down, staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft,
but its message clear and loud.
"I love my daddy very much,
he's my shining star.
And if he could, he'd be here,
but heaven's just too far
You see he was a firefighter
and died just this past year
When airplanes hit the towers
and taught Americans to fear.
But sometimes when I close my eyes,
it's like he never went away."
And then she closed her eyes,
and she saw him there that day.
And to her mothers amazement,
she witnessed with surprise
A room full of daddies and children,
all starting to close their eyes.
Who knows what they saw before them,
who knows what they felt inside.
Perhaps for merely a second,
they saw him at her side.
"I know you're with me Daddy,"
to the silence she called out.
And what happened next made believers,
of those once filled with doubt.
Not one in that room could explain it,
for each of their eyes had been closed.
But there on the desk beside her,
was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.
And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,
by the love of her shining star.
And given the gift of believing,
that heaven is never too far.
They say it takes a minute to find a special
person, an hour to appreciate them,
a day to love them, but then an entire
lifetime to forget them.
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04-22-2007, 07:26 PM
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If I beleived that Jesus was anything other than a man,than I would agree with you.
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Well, at least we can agree that He is not a woman. That's something at least.
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
Here is another peom for you. My cousin wrote it.
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Tell your queer cousin that maybe if he wasn't so busy aggravating God by mincing around writing poems in a limp-wristed fashion, God might not have felt the need to send some ragheads to fly aeroplanes into those towers in the first place!
O Lord our God, help us to tear their soldiers to bloody shreds with our shells; help us to cover their smiling fields with the pale forms of their patriot dead; help us to drown the thunder of the guns with the shrieks of their wounded, writhing in pain; help us to lay waste their humble homes with a hurricane of fire; help us to wring the hearts of their unoffending widows with unavailing grief; help us to turn them out roofless with little children to wander unfriended the wastes of their desolated land in rags and hunger and thirst, sports of the sun flames of summer and the icy winds of winter, broken in spirit, worn with travail, imploring Thee for the refuge of the grave and denied it--for our sakes who adore Thee, Lord, blast their hopes, blight their lives, protract their bitter pilgrimage, make heavy their steps, water their way with their tears, stain the white snow with the blood of their wounded feet! We ask it, in the spirit of love, of Him Who is the Source of Love, and Who is the ever-faithful refuge and friend of all that are sore beset and seek His aid with humble and contrite hearts. Amen.
God being truth, justice, goodness, beauty, power, and life, man is falsehood, iniquity, evil, ugliness, impotence, and death. God being master, man is the slave. Incapable of finding justice, truth, and eternal life by his own effort, he can attain them only through a divine revelation... he who desires to worship God must harbor no childish illusions about the matter, but bravely renounce his liberty and humanity.
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04-22-2007, 07:31 PM
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Tell your queer cousin that maybe if he wasn't so busy aggravating God by mincing around writing poems in a limp-wristed fashion, God might not have felt the need to send some ragheads to fly aeroplanes into those towers in the first place!
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First off my cuz is a girl, and thats a mean thing to say to someone who's dad tried to help those poor people in that tower.
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04-22-2007, 09:41 PM
That one sucked just as much as the other one.
L ve, Sister Thumper
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04-22-2007, 10:00 PM
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Originally Posted by BibleThumpinBlonde
That one sucked just as much as the other one.
L ve, Sister Thumper
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Awww..Thank you
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04-23-2007, 06:27 PM
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First off my cuz is a girl, and thats a mean thing to say to someone who's dad tried to help those poor people in that tower.
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Friend,
Terrorist crashing planes into crowded building is just the symptom, lets treat the disease here. If your dear cousin would stop fretting about people who are being punished for abandoning God like the child in the poem and started writing about Jesus HE would not be forced to kill so many people to get her attention. Is it too much to ask your cousin to return the love given to her. Christ killed over 2,000 people 9/11, isn’t that sincere enough?
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04-23-2007, 06:49 PM
Just for you and your cousin, Kiki.
With L ve and heartfelt compassion, Sister Thumper
Last edited by Daisy Mae Johnson; 04-23-2007 at 06:50 PM.
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04-23-2007, 07:10 PM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
into my soul
i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd
reach for me
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My, my. How sad. Sad, as in pathetic. This sounds like something you'd find on DeviantTard.com. You should go post your emo poetry there. It has no place on God's Favourite Forums.
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04-23-2007, 07:15 PM
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Pastor, admitting that I like and enjoy sex does not make me a harlot,nor do I fonicate with every man I meet. If I rember right a harlot is a prostitute and a prostitute sells herself. I have not now or ever sell myself. I will read more of the Holy Bible, but I will never beat my son.
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What?! Not beat your son?! What in hell is the matter with you? How can you have been here for so long and not have heard the following scripture? " Proverbs 13:24: He that spareth his rod hateth his son: but he that loveth him chasteneth him betimes."
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-23-2007, 10:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by kikirnw
into my soul
i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd
reach for me
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I think it's a very lovely poem.
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04-23-2007, 10:43 PM
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Originally Posted by Lunar_seed
I think it's a very lovely poem.
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Congratulations, Kiki: Your "poetry" has now received the offical Faggot Seal of Approval.
O Lord our God, help us to tear their soldiers to bloody shreds with our shells; help us to cover their smiling fields with the pale forms of their patriot dead; help us to drown the thunder of the guns with the shrieks of their wounded, writhing in pain; help us to lay waste their humble homes with a hurricane of fire; help us to wring the hearts of their unoffending widows with unavailing grief; help us to turn them out roofless with little children to wander unfriended the wastes of their desolated land in rags and hunger and thirst, sports of the sun flames of summer and the icy winds of winter, broken in spirit, worn with travail, imploring Thee for the refuge of the grave and denied it--for our sakes who adore Thee, Lord, blast their hopes, blight their lives, protract their bitter pilgrimage, make heavy their steps, water their way with their tears, stain the white snow with the blood of their wounded feet! We ask it, in the spirit of love, of Him Who is the Source of Love, and Who is the ever-faithful refuge and friend of all that are sore beset and seek His aid with humble and contrite hearts. Amen.
God being truth, justice, goodness, beauty, power, and life, man is falsehood, iniquity, evil, ugliness, impotence, and death. God being master, man is the slave. Incapable of finding justice, truth, and eternal life by his own effort, he can attain them only through a divine revelation... he who desires to worship God must harbor no childish illusions about the matter, but bravely renounce his liberty and humanity.
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