What's On Today

[Rev. Dr. Davidson]

This is a little peice I did about the LIE-beral media.

Listen folks, all gather round

For we shall never deceive

We preach for you every day

With stories you can believe

Death and bullshit is what we sell

And you eat it up, every bite

We are there no matter what time

To embellish and to start a fight

We come to your home invited or not

We tell you what you should think

Say one word against our truth

We’ll destroy you before you can blink

For us nothing’s sacred, truth not required

We’ll make it true before your very eyes

Not a care is given for who we destroy

We must make sure our way never dies

We’ll feed you this steaming load of crap

And perform this service for free

We know you’ll love the mess we create

Tonight on local channel three

Copyright 2006 Barry N. Davidson

[Tyrone Shoelaces]

Re: What's On Today

Not too shabby.

[Poetic Peter]

Re: What's On Today

Not too shabby
A wee bit flabby

(next critic, add a couplet line?)

Rev! Thanks for your fine poem!
The content raises discontent,
and that is good because "dem" lieberals "am" bad.

[Glendora Christianson]

Re: What's On Today

Not too shabby
A wee bit flabby
(next critic, add a couplet line?)

Justified or centered
sentences or splintered
A sonnet is fine
but a ballad saves time
And your message
is TV's visage

[Rev. Dr. Davidson]

Re: What's On Today

Justified or centered
sentences or splintered
A sonnet is fine
but a ballad saves time
And your message
is TV's visage

Glendora,
Thank you, but a sonnet???? I've done a few in my time. Structured poetry if a hard one to do.... I have done a few in the past, but they're not appropiate for God's favorite forum. If you wish, I could send a few to your husband.

Acrostic, English sonnet, triolet, and a few other types. The hardest was the villanelle.

[Poetic Peter]

Re: What's On Today

I have done a few in the past, but they're not appropiate for God's favorite forum

?

Why is that?

Please post some or all.