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  • Life's a beach

    I wrote this one at the resort I stayed at in cancun.

    Life...is a beach, amigos!

    Easy one, easy dos
    Feelin' the sand between my toes
    Evening glows, morning rise
    On the beach, there's much surprise
    Jesus is the one I want
    To praise with on the waterfront
    He has died, for all us each
    For God has made my life a beach.

    Last edited by Jimmy C Lombardo; 08-30-2010, 02:39 AM. Reason: further inspiriation

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    Re: Life's a beach

    I like the rhyme pattern, and the powerful emotion conveyed when you talk about Jesus praising alongside you at the waterfront.

    Bravo.
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    A woman came up to me the other day, 12/6/2016 and said:
    "But Mr. Winner, if GOD loves everyone then why is there so much suffering in the world?"

    Because GOD doesn't love everyone. Too many people have this absurd idea in their heads that GOD is all loving.
    If he was all loving, then murderers, thieves and homosexuals would be waiting for you in Heaven.

    GOD doesn't open his gate to just anyone. Being a True Christian™ is like a Queue Jump ticket at Disney, we are guaranteed a ride with JESUS.

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