my soul akes 4 u my love

[Fallen Angel]

my soul akes 4 u my love
the dark petals of a black rose
cover r bed n the rain false outside
i look into ur eyes n see my face
but its just a dream coz
my soul akes 4 ur my love
n i ask if u love me 2
dun clip my wings my love
u n me 2tegether as 1
n we can do nething
my soul akes 4 u my love
the shadows gather inside
without u i seek the peace of death
where i cant b hurt nemore
but not yet coz i must wait
coz my soul akes 4 u my love


(dun worry i dun plan on killing myself its just a poem)

[Roberta]

Re: my soul akes 4 u my love

[Justina Thyme]

Re: my soul akes 4 u my love

(dun worry i dun plan on killing myself its just a poem)

And I should worry about this why?

PS. u suk

[Nobar King]

Re: my soul akes 4 u my love

(dun worry i dun plan on killing myself its just a poem)

I didn't read the whole poem (*the ridiculous lolcatz spelling and lack of punctuation is a put off), but I did get my hopes up when I read this line, "i seek the peace of death". The disclaimer kind of put a damper on those feelings.

[Fallen Angel]

Re: my soul akes 4 u my love

i dun get it. whats it sposed to mean? n every1 else no need 2 b mean. im just sharing my poems n i hope they touch ppls hearts n open there eyes. if i can do that then ur meanness wont hurt me.

[Justina Thyme]

Re: my soul akes 4 u my love

Helpful hint: If you would write yo "poems" in sum-m sum-m approximat'n standard English, they might git a betta reception in all flavas.