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  • Poetic Peter
    Christian Poet Emeritus
    Forum Member
    • Nov 2006
    • 1696

    #46
    Re: Critical Inputs Forum no.1

    "Letter to Pinocchio"
    by Albino Luciani





    When you fall in love...




    Dear Pinocchio,



    I was seven years old when I read your Adventures for the first time.
    I couldn't tell you how much I liked them nor how many times I have read them again since then.
    The truth is that in you, boy, I recognized myself; in your atmosphere, my atmosphere.



    How many times you ran through the forest, through the fields, by the beach, by the streets!
    The Vixen and the Cat, the dog Medoro, the children of the battle of the books were running with you.
    They seemed my races, my fellows, the streets and the fields of my village.



    You ran to see the covered carts that arrived at the square; so do I.
    You complained, you twisted your mouth, you put your head under the sheets before drinking the bitter medicine;
    so do I. The slice of bread with butter on both sides, the cinnamon pie, the lemon candy and, in sometimes,
    even an egg, a pear, or even its skins, represented an exquisite dish for you, glutton and hungry as you were;
    the same happened to me.



    I also, when going and coming back from school, I saw myself involved in "battles": with snow balls in winter;
    with punchs and kicks in all the seasons of the year; sometimes I "incased";
    or gave, always trying to balance "credits" with "debits" and not to snivel at home, where, if I had complained,
    perhaps they would have given me "the rest".



    And now you have come back. You speak from the pages of the book no longer, but from the TV screen.
    But you continue being the same boy of other times.



    I, however, have grown old. I already am, if it is possible to speak like that, to the opposite side of the barricade.
    I can't recognize myself in you any more, but in your advisers:
    the teacher Gepeto, Beppe Grillo, the Blackbird, the Parrot, the Glow-worm, the Crab, the Marmot.



    They tried - God!, without success, except in the case of the Tuna - to give you advices for your child life.



    I try to give them for your child and adult life. Be careful!
    Don't have the idea of throwing the hammer on me, you either, because
    I am not willing to end like the poor Beppe Grillo!

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    • Poetic Peter
      Christian Poet Emeritus
      Forum Member
      • Nov 2006
      • 1696

      #47
      posted for criticisms

      Bible Bowlerama



      He built this bowling alley, Earth.
      He made mankind for bowling pins.
      He gave Satan big black balls
      leather grins and winning streaks.

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      • Brother Temperance
        Senior Usher
        True Christian™ missionary to the Unsaved Kingdom
        A very nice young man
        True Christian™
        • Sep 2006
        • 15621

        #48
        Re: posted for criticisms

        Originally posted by Poetic Peter View Post
        Bible Bowlerama




        He built this bowling alley, Earth.
        He made mankind for bowling pins.
        He gave Satan big black balls

        leather grins and winning streaks.
        I preferred the line about big red balls in the original, it brought to mind images of Satan's tools:
        O Lord our God, help us to tear their soldiers to bloody shreds with our shells; help us to cover their smiling fields with the pale forms of their patriot dead; help us to drown the thunder of the guns with the shrieks of their wounded, writhing in pain; help us to lay waste their humble homes with a hurricane of fire; help us to wring the hearts of their unoffending widows with unavailing grief; help us to turn them out roofless with little children to wander unfriended the wastes of their desolated land in rags and hunger and thirst, sports of the sun flames of summer and the icy winds of winter, broken in spirit, worn with travail, imploring Thee for the refuge of the grave and denied it--for our sakes who adore Thee, Lord, blast their hopes, blight their lives, protract their bitter pilgrimage, make heavy their steps, water their way with their tears, stain the white snow with the blood of their wounded feet! We ask it, in the spirit of love, of Him Who is the Source of Love, and Who is the ever-faithful refuge and friend of all that are sore beset and seek His aid with humble and contrite hearts. Amen.



        God being truth, justice, goodness, beauty, power, and life, man is falsehood, iniquity, evil, ugliness, impotence, and death. God being master, man is the slave. Incapable of finding justice, truth, and eternal life by his own effort, he can attain them only through a divine revelation... he who desires to worship God must harbor no childish illusions about the matter, but bravely renounce his liberty and humanity.

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