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I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 05:09 AM
into my soul
i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd
reach for me
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 05:10 AM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
into my soul
i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd
reach for me |
There's a poetry forum for a reason, but I doubt they'd be extremely interested in your heathen elmo ramblings.
Proverbs 23:13 Withhold not correction from the child: for if thou beatest him with the rod, he shall not die. 14Thou shalt beat him with the rod, and shalt deliver his soul from hell.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 02:28 PM
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Originally Posted by Warrior in Christ
There's a poetry forum for a reason, but I doubt they'd be extremely interested in your heathen elmo ramblings.
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I am told that ramblings is what women do. I being a women what more did you expect.
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04-20-2007, 02:35 PM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
I am told that ramblings is what women do. I being a women what more did you expect.
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Its not what we expect, its what GOD expects out of you. 
And if a woman have an issue, and her issue in her flesh be blood, she shall be put apart seven days: and whosoever toucheth her shall be unclean until the even. And every thing that she lieth upon in her separation shall be unclean: every thing also that she sitteth upon shall be unclean. And whosoever toucheth her bed shall wash his clothes, and bathe himself in water, and be unclean until the even. And whosoever toucheth any thing that she sat upon shall wash his clothes, and bathe himself in water, and be unclean until the even. And if it be on her bed, or on any thing whereon she sitteth, when he toucheth it, he shall be unclean until the even. And if any man lie with her at all, and her flowers be upon him, he shall be unclean seven days; and all the bed whereon he lieth shall be unclean. And if a woman have an issue of her blood many days out of the time of her separation, or if it run beyond the time of her separation; all the days of the issue of her uncleanness shall be as the days of her separation: she shall be unclean. Every bed whereon she lieth all the days of her issue shall be unto her as the bed of her separation: and whatsoever she sitteth upon shall be unclean, as the uncleanness of her separation. And whosoever toucheth those things shall be unclean, and shall wash his clothes, and bathe himself in water, and be unclean until the even. But if she be cleansed of her issue, then she shall number to herself seven days, and after that she shall be clean. And on the eighth day she shall take unto her two turtles, or two young pigeons, and bring them unto the priest, to the door of the tabernacle of the congregation. And the priest shall offer the one for a sin offering, and the other for a burnt offering; and the priest shall make an atonement for her before the LORD for the issue of her uncleanness. -- Leviticus 15:19-30
If any man take a wife, and go in unto her, and hate her, And give occasions of speech against her, and bring up an evil name upon her, and say, I took this woman, and when I came to her, I found her not a maid: Then shall the father of the damsel, and her mother, take and bring forth the tokens of the damsel's virginity unto the elders of the city in the gate.... But if this thing be true, and the tokens of virginity be not found for the damsel: Then they shall bring out the damsel to the door of her father's house, and the men of her city shall stone her with stones that she die: because she hath wrought folly in Israel, to play the whore in her father's house: so shalt thou put evil away from among you. -- Deuteronomy 22:13
Unto the woman he said, I will greatly multiply thy sorrow and thy conception; in sorrow thou shalt bring forth children; and thy desire shall be to thy husband, and he shall rule over thee. --Genesis 3:16
Wives, submit yourselves unto your own husbands, as unto the Lord. For the husband is the head of the wife, even as Christ is the head of the church: and he is the saviour of the body. Therefore as the church is subject unto Christ, so let the wives be to their own husbands in every thing. -- Ephesians 5:22-24
Here is a partial list from just a few scripture verses:
Hypocrites (Matthew 24:51), The Unforgiving (Mark 11:26), Homosexuals (Romans 1:26, 27), Fornicators (Romans 1:29), The Wicked (Romans 1:29), The Covetous (Romans 1:29), The Malicious (Romans 1:29), The Envious (Romans 1:29), Murderers (Romans 1:29), The Deceitful (Romans 1:29), Backbiters (Romans 1:30), Haters of God (Romans 1:30), The Despiteful (Romans 1:30), The Proud (Romans 1:30), Boasters (Romans 1:30), Inventors of evil (Romans 1:30), Disobedient to parents (Romans 1:30), Covenant breakers (Romans 1:31), The Unmerciful (Romans 1:31), The Implacable (Romans 1:31), The Unrighteous (1Corinthians 6:9), Idolaters (1Corinthians 6:9), Adulterers (1Corinthians 6:9), The Effeminate (1Corinthians 6:9), Thieves (1Corinthians 6:10), Drunkards (1Corinthians 6:10), Reviler (1Corinthians 6:10), Extortioners (1Corinthians 6:10), The Fearful (Revelation 21:8), The Unbelieving (Revelation 21:8), The Abominable (Revelation 21:8), Whoremongers (Revelation 21:8), Sorcerers (Revelation 21:8), All Liars (Revelation 21:8)
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 02:53 PM
I felt at peace when I wrote this poem and feel that way when ever I read it again.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 05:10 PM
I get really sad sometimes.
Pastor said that Women probably don't have a Soul.
It's not yet conclusive, but unless a Pastor can prove to me otherwise................ 
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HE took the damsel by the hand, and said unto her, Talitha Cumi; which is,
being interpreted, Damsel, I say unto thee, arise!...Mark 5:41
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 05:29 PM
I think we can all be thankful that Poetic Peter's not here, the gentle soul would probably pass away from sheer shock if he witnessed that emo overload.
O Lord our God, help us to tear their soldiers to bloody shreds with our shells; help us to cover their smiling fields with the pale forms of their patriot dead; help us to drown the thunder of the guns with the shrieks of their wounded, writhing in pain; help us to lay waste their humble homes with a hurricane of fire; help us to wring the hearts of their unoffending widows with unavailing grief; help us to turn them out roofless with little children to wander unfriended the wastes of their desolated land in rags and hunger and thirst, sports of the sun flames of summer and the icy winds of winter, broken in spirit, worn with travail, imploring Thee for the refuge of the grave and denied it--for our sakes who adore Thee, Lord, blast their hopes, blight their lives, protract their bitter pilgrimage, make heavy their steps, water their way with their tears, stain the white snow with the blood of their wounded feet! We ask it, in the spirit of love, of Him Who is the Source of Love, and Who is the ever-faithful refuge and friend of all that are sore beset and seek His aid with humble and contrite hearts. Amen.
God being truth, justice, goodness, beauty, power, and life, man is falsehood, iniquity, evil, ugliness, impotence, and death. God being master, man is the slave. Incapable of finding justice, truth, and eternal life by his own effort, he can attain them only through a divine revelation... he who desires to worship God must harbor no childish illusions about the matter, but bravely renounce his liberty and humanity.
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04-20-2007, 05:33 PM
My, what is the world coming to these days?! Honest lee, this sounds like something Ping Pong over there at Virginia Tech wrote right before he went on his purging killing spree. I have reported this to the Department of Faith, and they will be looking into this to ensure that no Godly men and women are at risk.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 09:00 PM
It is merely a poem. Gees its not like its a spell or something. Oh and I do have a soul, thank you very much.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 09:10 PM
What spells *don't* rhyme? Honestly, I can't think of a single spell that doesn't rhyme. It's probably because the homosexuals are responsible for writing down the Devil's Handiwork and put their own trendy little spin on everything.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 09:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Dr. Ernest C. Ville, D.C.S.
What spells *don't* rhyme? Honestly, I can't think of a single spell that doesn't rhyme. It's probably because the homosexuals are responsible for writing down the Devil's Handiwork and put their own trendy little spin on everything.
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Some peoms rhyme to Dr.( would you rather be called Dr. or sir), It is only a peom and thats all. Truthfully it was about a dream I had when I was little.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 09:36 PM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
Some peoms rhyme to Dr.( would you rather be called Dr. or sir), It is only a peom and thats all. Truthfully it was about a dream I had when I was little.
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It may well be a 'peom' but it is not poetry, and I'm not sure I can take much more of this without a rest to pray and regather my strength.
Revelation 21:8 But the fearful, and unbelieving, and the abominable, and murderers, and whoremongers, and sorcerers, and idolaters, and all liars, shall have their part in the lake which burneth with fire and brimstone: which is the second death.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 10:10 PM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
into my soul
i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd
reach for me |
I think it's a very nice poem.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 10:28 PM
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Originally Posted by Enobarbus
It may well be a 'peom' but it is not poetry, and I'm not sure I can take much more of this without a rest to pray and regather my strength.
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Oh, well then I guess you are intitled to your opinion, but I will not appolosie this time,though.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-20-2007, 11:01 PM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
Oh, well then I guess you are intitled to your opinion, but I will not appolosie this time,though.
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It's not an opinion, it's an advice.
The Lord is a man of war: the Lord is his name.
Exodus 15:3
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04-21-2007, 01:30 AM
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Originally Posted by tommy
It's not an opinion, it's an advice.
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Tommy,friend I'll listen to the advice but until I know for sure what I beleive in I don't think I can take it.
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-21-2007, 02:49 AM
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Originally Posted by Brother Temperance
I think we can all be thankful that Poetic Peter's not here, the gentle soul would probably pass away from sheer shock if he witnessed that emo overload.
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I'm just returning from the depths of despair after reading that. This woman is suffering from the center of the universe syndrome. What a self centered harlot, notice how many times she says "me", "me", "me", "me". Not one mention of Jesus is to be found. It's no wonder we are becoming a nation downing massive doses of Prozac and Wellbutrin. Women who are in the kitchen baking pies, searing steaks, cooking baked potatoes with bacon, chives and sour cream, and fetching beers don't have this problem.
Hell's foundations quiver at the shout of praise;
brothers, lift your voices, loud your anthems raise.
...and get off my lawn
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-21-2007, 03:08 AM
The peom is meant to make you feel. All peoms are meant to make one feel something. Be it sad,happy, ect.....
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-21-2007, 03:19 AM
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Originally Posted by kikirnw
The peom is meant to make you feel. All peoms are meant to make one feel something. Be it sad,happy, ect.....
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It had gave me the slight urge to vomit. Do that be what I's supposed to feel at readin' that ignance? If so, I guess it had worked. More Jesus next time, less whinin'. Then maybe folk would actually like it.
"He went on CNN and he laughed at us, and he said, 'They'll never get me because Allah will protect me. Allah will protect me.' Well, you know what? I knew that my God was bigger than his. I knew that my God was a real God and his was an idol." - Lt. General William G. Boykin
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Re: I thought this might be ok to post -
04-21-2007, 04:58 AM
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Originally Posted by Sista Lateefah
It had gave me the slight urge to vomit. Do that be what I's supposed to feel at readin' that ignance? If so, I guess it had worked. More Jesus next time, less whinin'. Then maybe folk would actually like it.
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Congrates on the marragie,and i'm sorry it wasn't suppose to make some sick.
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