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[kikirnw]

into my soul
i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd
reach for me

[Warrior in Christ]

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into my soul

i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd

reach for me

There's a poetry forum for a reason, but I doubt they'd be extremely interested in your heathen elmo ramblings.

[kikirnw]

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There's a poetry forum for a reason, but I doubt they'd be extremely interested in your heathen elmo ramblings.

I am told that ramblings is what women do. I being a women what more did you expect.

[Pastor Ezekiel]

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I am told that ramblings is what women do. I being a women what more did you expect.

Its not what we expect, its what GOD expects out of you.


And if a woman have an issue, and her issue in her flesh be blood, she shall be put apart seven days: and whosoever toucheth her shall be unclean until the even. And every thing that she lieth upon in her separation shall be unclean: every thing also that she sitteth upon shall be unclean. And whosoever toucheth her bed shall wash his clothes, and bathe himself in water, and be unclean until the even. And whosoever toucheth any thing that she sat upon shall wash his clothes, and bathe himself in water, and be unclean until the even. And if it be on her bed, or on any thing whereon she sitteth, when he toucheth it, he shall be unclean until the even. And if any man lie with her at all, and her flowers be upon him, he shall be unclean seven days; and all the bed whereon he lieth shall be unclean. And if a woman have an issue of her blood many days out of the time of her separation, or if it run beyond the time of her separation; all the days of the issue of her uncleanness shall be as the days of her separation: she shall be unclean. Every bed whereon she lieth all the days of her issue shall be unto her as the bed of her separation: and whatsoever she sitteth upon shall be unclean, as the uncleanness of her separation. And whosoever toucheth those things shall be unclean, and shall wash his clothes, and bathe himself in water, and be unclean until the even. But if she be cleansed of her issue, then she shall number to herself seven days, and after that she shall be clean. And on the eighth day she shall take unto her two turtles, or two young pigeons, and bring them unto the priest, to the door of the tabernacle of the congregation. And the priest shall offer the one for a sin offering, and the other for a burnt offering; and the priest shall make an atonement for her before the LORD for the issue of her uncleanness. -- Leviticus 15:19-30

If any man take a wife, and go in unto her, and hate her, And give occasions of speech against her, and bring up an evil name upon her, and say, I took this woman, and when I came to her, I found her not a maid: Then shall the father of the damsel, and her mother, take and bring forth the tokens of the damsel's virginity unto the elders of the city in the gate.... But if this thing be true, and the tokens of virginity be not found for the damsel: Then they shall bring out the damsel to the door of her father's house, and the men of her city shall stone her with stones that she die: because she hath wrought folly in Israel, to play the whore in her father's house: so shalt thou put evil away from among you. -- Deuteronomy 22:13

Unto the woman he said, I will greatly multiply thy sorrow and thy conception; in sorrow thou shalt bring forth children; and thy desire shall be to thy husband, and he shall rule over thee. --Genesis 3:16

Wives, submit yourselves unto your own husbands, as unto the Lord. For the husband is the head of the wife, even as Christ is the head of the church: and he is the saviour of the body. Therefore as the church is subject unto Christ, so let the wives be to their own husbands in every thing. -- Ephesians 5:22-24

[kikirnw]

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I felt at peace when I wrote this poem and feel that way when ever I read it again.

[Talitha]

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I get really sad sometimes.
Pastor said that Women probably don't have a Soul.
It's not yet conclusive, but unless a Pastor can prove to me otherwise................

[Brother Temperance]

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I think we can all be thankful that Poetic Peter's not here, the gentle soul would probably pass away from sheer shock if he witnessed that emo overload.

[Dr. Ernest C. Ville, D.C.S.]

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My, what is the world coming to these days?! Honest lee, this sounds like something Ping Pong over there at Virginia Tech wrote right before he went on his purging killing spree. I have reported this to the Department of Faith, and they will be looking into this to ensure that no Godly men and women are at risk.

[kikirnw]

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It is merely a poem. Gees its not like its a spell or something. Oh and I do have a soul, thank you very much.

[Dr. Ernest C. Ville, D.C.S.]

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What spells *don't* rhyme? Honestly, I can't think of a single spell that doesn't rhyme. It's probably because the homosexuals are responsible for writing down the Devil's Handiwork and put their own trendy little spin on everything.

[kikirnw]

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What spells *don't* rhyme? Honestly, I can't think of a single spell that doesn't rhyme. It's probably because the homosexuals are responsible for writing down the Devil's Handiwork and put their own trendy little spin on everything.

Some peoms rhyme to Dr.( would you rather be called Dr. or sir), It is only a peom and thats all. Truthfully it was about a dream I had when I was little.

[Enobarbus]

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Some peoms rhyme to Dr.( would you rather be called Dr. or sir), It is only a peom and thats all. Truthfully it was about a dream I had when I was little.

It may well be a 'peom' but it is not poetry, and I'm not sure I can take much more of this without a rest to pray and regather my strength.

[Loser_seed (Quarantined)]

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into my soul

i might go
where no one
except me
can be free
but reach for me
into my mind
i might go
where no one
except me
can see
but reach for me
into your life
i might go
where no one
except me
can be
if only you'd

reach for me

I think it's a very nice poem.

[kikirnw]

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It may well be a 'peom' but it is not poetry, and I'm not sure I can take much more of this without a rest to pray and regather my strength.

Oh, well then I guess you are intitled to your opinion, but I will not appolosie this time,though.

[tommy]

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Oh, well then I guess you are intitled to your opinion, but I will not appolosie this time,though.

It's not an opinion, it's an advice.