Here is a new song I was working on for the youth group.

[Levi Jones]

These kids seem to like this kind of stuff these days. I was wondering if I could get you guy's feedback as to how awesome it is.

Greetings brothers and sisters
Let's take a journey

I know a place
Where the streets are paved of gold
Warm, wet and wild
There must be somethin' in the water
Sippin' dew and manna

Layin' underneath the palm trees (Undone)
The boys
Break their necks
Try'na creep a little sneak peek (At Jesus)

You could travel the world
But nothing comes close
To the Holy Ghost
Once you party with us
You'll be falling in love with Jesus
Oooooh oh oooooh

Jesus Jesus
You're unforgettable
Vesture dipped in blood
Many crowns on top
Skin white as snow
So hot
He'll throw you into hell
Oooooh oh oooooh

Jesus
You're undeniable
Fine, fresh, fierce
We got it on lock
Heaven represent
Now put your hands up and worship Him.
Oooooh oh oooooh

Jesus and me on the beach
We don't mind sand in our sandals
We freak
In my Jeep

Toned, tanned
Fit and ready
Hold me Jesus 'cause it's gettin' heavy
Wild, wild Heaven
This is the Deity I love the most
I mean the One
I mean like He's the One
Kiss Him
Touch Him
Play with His hair.
This God is jealous
He drives a white horse
and lives in the Heaven
I'm okay
I won't play
I love our LORD
But not in a gay way.

Jesus my Lord
(Yeah)
You're lookin' here
(Uh huh)
I'm all up on you
Cause you representin Heaven.
(Ohhh yeahh)

[Wash O'Hanley]

Re: Here is a new song I was working on for the youth group.

Who says poetry can't be straight and manly?

[Rev. M. Rodimer]

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Is there some sort of tune to go with it?

[CyberYahweh]

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Definitely a foot-tapper you have there, sir.

[Nobar King]

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The "wet and wild" stuff is just a little too sexual for me.

[Jeb Stuart Thurmond]

Re: Here is a new song I was working on for the youth group.

The "wet and wild" stuff is just a little too sexual for me.

Why do people keep thinking terms like that are sexual? I just don't see what's so sexual about something being hot and wet. Lukewarm and sticky, yes, but not hot and wet.

[landoverlover]

Re: Here is a new song I was working on for the youth group.

Is there some sort of tune to go with it?

I did a White Boy Rap with it in front of the mirror with a broom for a mic and some pretend negresses for backup. Since it was rap there is nothing even remotely musical about it, but the words sure had rythm!